Reflection on Pin Up

There was much focus on diagrammatic representation and general analysis on the body movements. I agree with both comments, in that the diagrams could have had more variety. Instead of just the generic representations. I also feel like the analysis on the body diagrams were not dynamic enough. They all look very similar and contain the same element of analysis. Although, in my defense, I do feel that using similar techniques to represent an analysis only puts emphasis on the analysis. I believe if I were to vigorously analyze the body diagrams in the same way, but with intensity, the outcome would make a greater difference.

I think a failure in my part was the clarity in my presentation. I focused more on the process of the entire design, instead of the actual outcome. Not only that, my actual presentation was sloppy, which could have possibly led to misunderstandings in my overall design and intentions. As for my next project, I believe I will put more thought in my diagrammatic representations to coherently show my intentions. I will also make changes to my final model with the critique in mind.